Monday, May 4, 2009

Daily Procces Journal

We continued writing our essay in MMLab, i finished writing the forth paragraoh and started the fifth paragraph which is about the gods and godesses name, and what are they for. Also about the scrafices.

Sunday, May 3, 2009

Daily Procces Journal

On 29/04/2009, we continued writing our essay. I finished writing my second paragraph and my third which is about different kind of goverments and the rulers in Ancient Greece.

On 3/05/2009, was absent.

Tuesday, April 28, 2009

Daily Process Journal

Before we go in the MMLab, our teacher told a very excited news. The word limit has been changed and know it is 1200 - 1600. Every body was soo happy!! :D After the GREAT news, we entered the MMLab and started to write our essay. I had a little problem writing my introducation,i asked for many to help but still i coudn't have a great sentence to began with. So i wrote my introduction with out a great sentence to began with, i thought to myself i am just going to continue and maybe during typing the essay, a great sentence will pop out of my mind. That was true, i got an OK sentence but it is still good. When i finished writing my intorduction, i began to write my second paragraph. It was about goverment organization and in law courts. i finished half of the paragraph but stll i have so much more to write. But guess wat?? The bell rang.

Monday, April 27, 2009

Daily Process Journal

27/04/2009
The minute i entered the classroom i took all my stuff and books, and started writing. Before the bell rings i finished all my plan encluding introduction and conclusion. I ended up to have 11 paragraphs, which this is great because the minamin is 9 paragraph and the maxinim is 11. That is so great.
After writing the plan, we have to write it in draft. I sat down the chair thinking what do i have to write for introduction and i had many idea, which is kinda of bad because i dont know what to write first. The plan page was infront of me and holding a pencil, thinking what to wright first, but the bell rang.

Daily Process Journal

Today is 26/04/2009.
This is our first day to plan, draft, write our final essay!!! Our teacher showed us pecific rules for our eassy.
He said...

  • that planning is the key for a good essay weather you have a lot of information or not.
  • that the first thing that we have to do is decide on a structure, and we have focused on 3 charateristic, but maybe we have to write more than one paragraph.
  • that we have to write INTRODUCTION & CONCLUSION.
  • that our word count is 1400 - 1600. we will lose morks for over or under the limit.

..... he gave us more intoduction.

After that we started to wright our plan. What i did is i wrote every paragraph what i am going to do or wright., also wirte what kind of question i am going to wirite for the paragraph that are about charateristic. Suddenley the bell rang, and i was starting to plan my fifth paragraph. Tomorrow is our last day to plan the essay.

Tuesday, April 21, 2009

Daily Process Journal

We are still going to the computer lab to continue researching. But today the teacher annouced that we just have this week to research, and next week we will start our essay that we don't have any idea what it is about, except the we have to write 1500 words. I finially finished the question, then i decided that the second question is all right also the rest of them.
Next is the second charaistice which is artetecture. There are just two questions that are not really complete Q3 and Q6. I started Q3 and it is about how religion festivals impress their gods and godesses. I just research it but i didn't have time to write it. Before i logged off i saved it as a "favorouit".

Monday, April 20, 2009

Daily Process Journal

We went to the computer lab again, we still worked on our project. But today i didn't work as hard as i worked the other past few days. I started to miss around a little, but still work. I continued working on the question that i didn't finish it the pass two days. I almost finish it but i didn't, i hope i can finish tomorrow.